It's a pretty common theme for Shounen to have a big hurdle that the hero fights to reach and overcome. So I certainly will take advantage of that. Demosthenes won't be the only either. There will be other monolithic like figures in the story to contend with in future arcs. All the way through the first three sub-arcs are the big shift. So that means you understand that people have specials powers now. You can start seeing more of that Shounen in the story. Seiji was definitely probably my favorite with the scenes he has with the ghost, she is a lot of fun.
I say it was a nice touch, and every story that has added a tall milestone turned out to be awesome, at least in my opinion. Like Bari in Zatch Bell, Frieza during the Namek arc in Dragon Ball Z (everyone was well aware of his power), the Gold Saints in Saint Seiya, and Kite Tenjo from Yu-Gi-Oh! Zexal. They all come to mind and they all make their respective stories exciting. and the way you did it wasn't bad at all. I made it all the way to 70 last night before calling it quits for the night. And from the looks of it it the story will shift to Ayumi now. I'll see tomorrow morning what happens then.
Yeah, Demosthenes was put specifically as that tall milestone that Yuki has to struggle to reach. It was necessary to show him early and give someone that won't be easily defeated and be back again later. From the sounds of it you read more than a chapter or two. But yes, one of the things you will find that I do is that I give everyone an equal chance to be awesome and stand in the center. It is an important thing for me to know that each character is just as important as Yuki. He might be the main character, but that doesn't mean he needs to solve everything or even can solve everything.
I can believe that. I know I'll eventually get to see Ayumi's homeland, especially now that there's a score to settle with Demosthenes. It's something I'm looking forward to. Update: I love how you are giving everyone their chance to shine. So far, I can't forget the first scene between Seiji and the ghost woman. I wasn't expecting the scene to turn into something serious so quickly after. I was also quite pleased when I bumped into Chiharu's chapters.
Yeah, you had been keeping the average going pretty well. Though it does vary on your days off. There's a lot of fun coming for you.
I will. I read one or two chapters a day on average during the week so you can keep track of where I'm at ^_^
Alright, I'll be around. So you can let me know when you're working through it.
Having read so much from you, I doubt I'll be disappointed. So I'll keep you updated
I'll be curious what you think of the change to a more Shounen Jump style the second half has. You should be happy with what you learn.
I'll be sure to stay rested throughout the day, as it helps in reading for periods of time. And don't worry about the lack of comments for now. I'll find it in myself to eventually say something for each chapter. It might happen once they are all on in your blog entries. I noticed there's an archetype in the Yu-Gi-Oh card game that is based on the Zodiac. It just so happens to be a Duel Terminal archetype, which will play a huge role much later in my story. As I've said, I already have an end for it and realizing this little fact is just icing on the cake. The signs of the Zodiac are such an interesting topic o_o
This is true, where you're at is going to be constant cliffhangers to nearly the end of the arc and then there is no stop in the cliffhangers after words.
Well I felt I had to leave before I bumped into another cliffhanger. >.> I will read it later, probably soon if not later. I haven't even started on chapter 2 in my story so it's taking a while to do everything x_x
Yeah, Hiroshi is actually a good guy, but it was also a pretty extreme situation. Though it was clear he had a plan. Well a lot of things happened with Yuki. So there is going to be a lot of things going around. Though you left on a big cliffhanger.
Well, I'm not really good at commenting on so many chapters at once. But I did love Hiroshi's chapter, I didn't expect him to be selfless enough to take the blame for something he didn't do. And by the way things are looking, Yuki has a lot of explaining to do to anyone who witnessed his power. Just when he's finally getting better, too.
Went already the way through chapter 60 huh? Not saying a lot for having gone all the way. There is a lot that happened to comment on. You'll be able to learn what happened with Chiharu soon enough. You already know that she woke up from her weird coma.
